I am highly indebted to all my blogger friends who read, appreciate and provide constant encouragement. However, no one is perfect and to improve ourselves we need valuable inputs from others. I wish to improve and hence look forward to honest feedback.
If you ask me, I would say, these lines are hard hitting for all of us,
"Walking down this aisle I peek taking a pause,
Shall I take a bow for fake applause?"
I hope few years down the lane, we all will be more evolved, not only as writers but as bloggers as well.
Love,
Your poem is brilliant! I am honestly jealous that you write so well
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Glad you like the work but honestly, I am jealous of your style quotient. Wish I can be somewhere close to you :)
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Thanks Shalini :)
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ReplyDeleteThe comments/suggestions/inputs by fellow bloggers are something that I always look for.
I know of a blogger who wrote to me a separate mail to tell me about the grammatical mistake that I had made in one of my posts.
I not only corrected the post, but it also helped me to never make that mistake in my life.
Yeah, when we use this medium to grow, nothing can beat that. :)
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